2010年9月13日 星期一

Making time more slowly

Writers can make time moves very very slowly, like its been a hundred years when only 10 minutes passed. They can also make millions of years time pass right at this very second. The usage of words and the punctuation stnads a very big part in how the writers change the time of a story.

Finney uses alot of flashbacks for the character, he have a major part of the story thinking what might be like if he fell down the ledge and nthe times that he have spent doing all that work. There are also other techinuques where Finnry uses alot of punctuation mark such as commas and no periods. Making the sentence rather long and stretches the time. Careful details also increase the time zone. A moving of a muscle, a tingle in the toe and all that flow of inner feelings can cause agreat load of time and words to be used and feel like time have passed for 1 and 2 hour when all the thing Tom have been thinking was ust simply 8 minutes.

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